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Old 01-30-2013, 01:28 PM
 
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Are the closets big enough for both our cloths???
The house has several hugh close closets.
How big are the cloths that you want to store in the close closets?


 
Old 01-30-2013, 01:29 PM
 
Location: Pittsburgh
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Just saw this title on CD: "Taking ya gurl to Applebee".
But the answers given to the guy are priceless
I've been reading that thread, and I really want to believe that the OP is a joke because otherwise it's just too sad to think about. Talk about functionally illiterate...
 
Old 01-30-2013, 02:38 PM
 
Location: Sudcaroland
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Just read in the food forum: "an inspiration date".
 
Old 01-30-2013, 03:25 PM
 
Location: Georgia, USA
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Hmmm...how about this fantasy real estate ad?

For Sell:
Hear we have a property located on a very nice culver sack!
This house features trey ceilings, rot iron fencing, jealousy windows, a new roov, an ashfault driveway, and it has alot of upgrades.
This track of land includes nice landscraping and several Oke and Popular trees. The location is very convient to public transportation

You won't loose money by investing in this property, so please contact the owners rite away, because there prolly interested in mooving soon!


Would anyone like to add more detail to my fantasy ad?
Do we have a lender who will borry us the money to buy it?
 
Old 01-30-2013, 08:34 PM
 
Location: Elsewhere
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I wonder how much writing could be improved with fewer adverbs.
Most.

I agree with those who say to remove as many adverbs as possible. When I finish writing something and then go into editing mode, I do a search on "ly " to find the adverbs. Of course you pick up things like "only" and "family", but most of the time, when you find you used an adverb, you can read the sentence with it and without it, and usually, it's better just to lose it.
 
Old 01-30-2013, 09:12 PM
 
Location: Victoria TX
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How often do you see "per say", used even where "per se" would be wrong.
 
Old 01-31-2013, 07:04 AM
 
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How often do you see "per say", used even where "per se" would be wrong.
Perhaps accompanied by "wah lah"?
 
Old 01-31-2013, 07:45 AM
 
Location: S.E. US
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Do we have a lender who will borry us the money to buy it?
Speaking of borrowing, how often does someone ask you to "borrow a tissue?" (as in kleenex)
Ugh.

I generally say, gently but firmly, "No, you may not borrow one; you may have one and keep it."
 
Old 01-31-2013, 10:14 AM
 
Location: Victoria TX
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Speaking of borrowing, how often does someone ask you to "borrow a tissue?" (as in kleenex)
Ugh.

I generally say, gently but firmly, "No, you may not borrow one; you may have one and keep it."
If I borrow a dollar from you, do you expect to be repaid with the same dollar?
 
Old 01-31-2013, 01:40 PM
 
Location: A Nation Possessed
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I've never understood why so many folks have a "thing" against adverbs. Anti-fetish? Is it just because a writing teacher once told you they were "bad"? Adverbs are simply another part of speech. And as with any part of speech, they can be used effectively or ineffectively. But they are not evil.

I've seen many examples in which adverbs are critical to the effect the writer is trying to achieve. And I've seen many examples in which they are abused or overused; but, when that is the case, the writing is typically poor to begin with. It isn't the fault of the adverb. Any part of speech can be abused. I'll bet I could come up with a humdinger that falls flat on its face because verbs or nouns are overused or abused. It's the same kind of thing you hear from certain segments about the evils of the passive verb construction. If passive verbs work in a given example of prose, they work. If they don't they don't. But there is nothing inherently "evil" about passive verbs, either.
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