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Old 02-05-2012, 10:09 AM
 
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I am attempting to cut down my resume, without sacrificing skills or being accused of omiting work experience. Please look over this resume and let me know where you think I could cut back without sacrificing skills

Please don't just suggest cutting this or that, please give a reason for why you think it should be cut.

Thanks

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[CENTER][CENTER]Summary of Qualifications and Certifications[/CENTER][/CENTER]

  • CompTIA A+ and Network+ certified
  • DCSE: Dell Certified Systems Expert
  • Windows 7 MCTS (In Progress)
  • Proficient in MS Office Suite Applications 2003, 2007, and 2010 versions
  • Web Designer: HTML and CSS Proficient
  • Moderate use of Linux Ubuntu and Mint, Apache Web Server and Cerberus FTP Server
  • Amateur (HAM) Radio Operator
  • Extensive world travel
  • 1st Degree Black Belt
[CENTER][CENTER]Education[/CENTER][/CENTER]

2008 Bachelor’s Degree in American History
Minor in Communications Studies
Graduated Magna *** Laude (3.76 GPA)
Chapman University

2008 Publicity Officer for the Alpha Mu Gamma Chapter of Phi Alpha Theta
Presented a historical research paper at the Phi Alpha Theta Regional Conference
Chapman University
[CENTER][CENTER]Work Experience / Volunteer Opportunities[/CENTER][/CENTER]

Nov 2011 to Present Dell $13/hr
Helpdesk Agent-Contract Position
  • Remote, Phone and Email support of Boeing Corporation users using Dameware, VNC, Remote Desktop and Webex software
  • Support over 50 calls per day
  • Use of Windows 7, Vista, XP. Troubleshooting of Boeing proprietary programs, Active Directory (including account creation, password reset), and the Microsoft Office 2003, 2007, 2010 suite: Word, Excel, Access, Outlook
  • Troubleshoot and setup for Blackberry devices
  • Tracking of all incidents and escalations through HP Service Manager

September 2011 to Present Volunteer Web Design
  • Creation of HTML and CSS web pages
  • Use of HTML text editor, Dreamweaver, Photoshop

2007 to Present Wadsley Tech Services $30/hr
Custom Computer Builds and IT Consulting
  • Personal consultant for customers desiring new computers or repairs and upgrades
  • Hardwire Home network setup, complete wireless setup with wireless security, Router and Firewall configuration
  • Image systems with Norton Ghost and Macrium Reflect
  • IMac configuration and wireless network setup

March 2011 to Nov 2011 Geeks On Site $25/hr
Desktop Support – Contract Position
  • In Home and SOHO Field Technician / User Support
  • Hardware repairs, Software installs, Wired and wireless networking troubleshooting and setup
  • Printer setup and maintenance
  • Use of Windows XP, Vista and 7

July 2010 to October 2010 ALEKS Corporation $19.23/hr
Customer Service Representative – Contract/Temporary Position
  • Assist customers with ALEKS software over the phone and via email
  • Use of Sugar CRM to track and record tickets

May 2010 to July 2010 Western Dental $14/hr
Helpdesk and Operations Technician
  • Customer Service/Call Center phone IT support and Onsite computer Desktop support
  • Service of workstations: Swap of HDD, RAM, PSU and other internal components
  • Image workstations using Norton Ghost
  • Network troubleshooting tools include tracert, ping, ipconfig, DNS, DCHP, Active Directory and FTP. Experience with LAN/WAN and wireless networks in a corporate environment
  • Phone support for about 25 calls per day using Dameware, VNC and Remote Desktop
  • Use of Lotus Notes for ticket tracking of cases
  • Computer repair of IBM desktop workstations, support of Windows XP and Vista

Feb 2009 to May 2010 Staples Office Supplies $8.60/hr
Easy Resident Technician
  • Lead / sole in-store technician for entire store with minimal supervision from management about technical decisions of computer repair
  • Phone and in person tech support as well as financial transactions at the register
  • PC Hardware and Software repairs and Cashier
  • Dell, HP, IBM, Compaq, Acer laptop and desktop repairs of HDD, PSU, Graphic Card installations, motherboard replacements, fan and heatsink replacements. Software: MS Office, Norton Anti Virus, Norton Ghost, Malware Bytes, CCleaner.Installation and activation of Operating Systems, virus removals, data transfers/backup. Peripheral setups of printers, scanners, and external hard drives. Printer replacement of in/toner. Support of Windows 98, 2000, ME, XP, Vista, and Windows 7 Operating Systems: Fresh reinstalls as well as reimage. User account creation, wireless security setup.
  • Customer support in store or on phone of approximately 15 to 20 support issues per day

Oct 2009 Chase/Washington Mutual Bank $15/hr
PC Technical Specialist- conversion project
  • Peripheral setup and breakdown for bank machines in addition to PC HW/SW troubleshooting
  • Card Scanner, PIN machines and Check readers installed and configured on bank computers

Oct 2008 to Nov 2008 Fry’s Electronics Fountain Valley, CA $8/hr
Electronic Component Accessories Sales
  • Customer Service and merchandizing of electronic component accessories
  • Technical Advisor for PC Components and peripheral devices
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Old 02-05-2012, 12:42 PM
 
Location: Las Vegas, NV
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The advice I've received on composing resumes includes tailoring the resume for the job for which you are applying. Unless that job involves extensive world travel, a degree in a martial art, or HAM radio, I'd start by cutting those lines. Employers generally don't care about anything other than what you can do for the company. You can cut other parts based on the position you are applying for also.

Unsolicited advice: In general, focus on showing what sort of difference you made to the companies where you worked. For example, if you increased that company's profit, or streamlined a process through your performance, try to show that, instead of simply stating your job functions. This would show your potential to the prospective firm.

More Unsolicited advice: Since your education does not directly support your field of work, I recommend putting that at the bottom of the resume.
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Old 02-05-2012, 02:15 PM
 
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Ya, I've heard you tailor your resume to fit the job, but so much of what I have is job related its hard to taylor. I have't made any huge achievements for the companies ive been with b/c ive never been in a position to do so.

The parts about world travel, black belt and HAM radio are more conversation starters than anything else.

Appreciate the advice though
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Old 02-05-2012, 06:54 PM
 
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At the top, I would start with a nice sentence or two stating a business summary of what type of job you are seeking. Skipping around of dates is very confusing; make it chronological. I would put the education on bottom since it is not tech related. Exclude the salaries.
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Old 02-05-2012, 08:20 PM
 
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here are some resume tips from a very useful book i got on resumes that led me to rewriting my resume
Ten Résumé Writing Tips
it looks like you are making the same mistake i was- listing only duties and and not explaining what u accomplished and how u made the company money
also careerbuilder on twitter has lots of good career tips
https://twitter.com/#!/CareerBuilder
if u live in a big city the often the county u live in will have a county career center that helps people look for work and improve resumes
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Old 02-06-2012, 10:47 AM
 
Location: GA
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Even if you don't have "great" achievements, quantifying anything can help.
"Successfully repaired 500 customer pcs with virus infections in 6 months."
"Top 5 of x companies tech employees."
"Achieved company objectives for retail display setup.'
Anything at all to show something other than passivity.
"Learned the following skills rapidly to fix something outside of the norm."
Also, check tech resume guides for listing all these CRM systems, it might not matter what they are called unless the place you are applying to has specified it or it has a huge userbase.

Check those guides posted but I'd suggest stop taking everything you did so literally.
You have to put a spin on it or reach into some customer experiences that set you apart from others.
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