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I only skipped around a few scenes but here is some of my feedback to take or leave:
There is a lot of dead space in conversation and lag in action of the characters. Maybe it's a limitation of the sims, but if you could make the action more tied to the characters it would flow better.
I understand the use of pause for dramatic effect, but every single conversation seems to have it due to the lag in speech/action, and this makes it difficult to watch.
Aside from those critical points my guess would be you spent a lot of time on the project and that is admirable. At this moment you have over 18k views so nice work getting the word out.
Good luck to you and don't take city data responses as an indicative measure of the warmth of our community. If you have specific questions other than "what do you think?" that may help viewers give you the feedback you are seeking.
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