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well i join city-Data.com because i wanted to be able to post my points of views and read what others had to say also.....ok lets well i believe in the Paranormal very much i mean there has to be more to then just being born .. i hope there is anyways .. not sure if i want to be a ghost but hey i hope i go on to a better place then to say i just lived that it ..lol..plzzzz .....i have had many encounters with ghosts...have seen them , felt them , heard them sense them since i was 6 years old ..being born hispanic / native american you kinda born into stuff like believing in ghosts ....i learn alot from my grandmother whom i think was wize beyond her years ...anyways i started sensing stuff understanding things about ghost but never said anything for fear i'd be thought as weird or crazy lol.... i post alot of my experiences on my myspace group i am in ....i join really to be able talk to others who have gone through what i have ...anyways if you want to know more just ask me kool...by ..
by ; brenda starz .........
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Death of a Angel !!!!!

Posted 11-29-2008 at 03:19 AM by brenda starz


like a hunted anmial she ran .. each step ment she was alive ...as she passed a broken window she shot a look , she no longer immortal , she had become something else .. sunk in face , circles under her eyes ... she stop and wondered who was this strange creature looking back at her , this was not her .... heart pounded with each turn she took ... the night was cold and it cut threw her bones she felt it .. hunger pains swept through her body .. she was now being hunted ... she could hear them as she ran loud voices saying KILL KILL KILL , their voices echo out ... soon they will find her and rip her to pieces ,slashing every bit of her frail body .. her heart raced and was finding it harder to breath must be geting weak ... as she ducked into one of the many run down buildings , her mind raced thinking how things had turn out this way for her ... putting her head against the dirty wall closed her eyes ahh sleep so sweet she welcomed it ... she dared to dream ... soon she heard it like a caged anmial she jumped to her feet , only to feel the first sharp cut ... then her blood ran down ... like water it was flowing ... her eyes look up there it stood this black figure , all she saw was the whites of his eyes , its as if time had stood still .. for a brief moment they looked at each other then the rest came running in .. in seconds she lay on the cold dirty floor ... her blood spilling ... as they tore into her , cuting slashing away like mad men ... this was the end , she could hear their laughter for joy they had taken another angel ... her once white wings they had claimed , she felt so naked with out them ... to them she was a anmial to be hunted a prize ... as the very life of her was slowly dripping ... she found the peace she had look for so long ... her eyes look to the sky and then closed ... Death had claimed another angel ....
by ; brenda
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    WOW, Brenda, what an amazing talent you have for the thriller..You actually had me there..Keep it up, girl..Oh and BTW, it is really great to see you again
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    Posted 11-30-2008 at 03:36 AM by Miss Blue Miss Blue is offline
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    thanks blue i am glade you like it theres a part twoi am going to post it soon ok ..hugs back
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    Posted 12-02-2008 at 02:49 AM by brenda starz brenda starz is offline
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